I’m done with the first draft of Chapter 17, and have started editing. The page count crept up again, so I’ve decided to split it into 2 chapters so that I can actually release something this year.

This has proved to be a tough chapter for a couple of reasons. First there’s quite a bit of action, and second there’s some big exchanges where the dialogue needs to be laser precise to properly justify and articulate various character actions and attitudes. This is what I have to suffer for trying to write a military drama where everyone is supposed to be a competent, rational professional. 🙂

Things are starting to come together, just a lot slower than I would have liked. There’s no art to preview yet as I don’t like putting out derpy, un-edited panels, but there will something on the next update.